I like it
I love the emotion and the meaning
The only thing that i would suggest is to maybe think about a rhyme scheme and the structure of the stanza(ex: 4 lines 3 lines)
Overall though. that was a good poem

Well done on a great write. A very good expression of your feelings, warm and heartfelt. keep them coming

Ok this one is a poem about secret love.. well yeah i know how it feels and through this poem i can picture our a painful scene but honestly this poem will look more interesting and captivating to readers like me if you enhance your vocabulary and imagination. hinder from using the same words over and over. keep it up dear, i know you can give more than this.

REally sweet poem...very well written piece of work!

Well the feelings were there but i dont feel as though it was expressed to your fullest potential. You really need to work on your flow and coming up with complete thoughts
3/5

HEY!
great poem, 5/5 love this heaps,
i can relate 2 this one
thnx for commentin mine 2!
love

I love your work! 5/5 glad that you like mine too

Wonderful job! nicely written and full of emotions.....5/5

Hey, thank you for commenting my poem! I really like the meaning in this one, very touching. Keep it up! Love Greta.

Wow...really good piece really great flow ! i like the meaning you put behind it <33

Hey thanx for the comment on my poems, this poems is really good, i liek how long it is. 5/5

"I want to tell you
That i love you
But i don't know how"

So many times people feel like this.. and you've managed to portray it perfectly
Well done!
5/5
*Gem*

Hey nina here
this poem is so sad but good 5 out of 5:)

You can tell its from the heart.

"You showed me that there was hope
And told me not to let go
You helped me think of the good things in life"

Thats so true =]
Theres always a positive side, even if you cant find it.
[xxx]

Lovely :)

Wow!I have the same feelings for a guy named Riley! great job! well worded5/5

Nice poem written very nicely
u are so talented a 5/5 from me as u truly deserve it

Great poem. I really loved the way you wrote it.

Keep up the good work!!!

5/5

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I love this poem! I teared up because I'm in that boat right now. Keep up your writing!

~Bobbi

This is a great piece keep it up i really enjoyed reading this :) 5/5

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