by Sweet lig
Wow!!!! i felt the nice words of wisdom... it reminds me that GOD never leave me in times of my troublesome.. thanks for ur poem it really means a lot to me.. very inspiring just keep on writing and keep up the good work....5/5 |
by ECILA ice
Talks about your faith? well it was a nice inspiring poem and i love it tough not so really my cup of tea.. but hey is there really a rhyming scheme in here? coz if you do there are some lines that doesn't fit or the sound/prnounciation doesn't jive well.. aside from that, no more other comment. just keep it up! |