Dont You Dare!!!

by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight   Oct 10, 2007


Dont touch me

dont look at me

dont tell me you understand

dont talk to me

dont love me

dont tell me to understand

dont say your sorry

dont cry out in pain

dont ask for forgiveness

For it is something you will never obtain

dont you @ucking yell at me

dont you dare raise that hand

dont you take that step toward me

dont tell me to take you back

Dont you threaten me I am not afraid of u, for I am finally taking a stand. If you touch me once, I will break you in half because for the first time in my life I am willing to hit you back

(to my ex whom i still cant forgive, sorr if it really bad. I was just so mad at her tonight for what she did to me....please try and be nice its my one of my first poems written without a backround or story behind it)

Thank you

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  • 16 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Oh em gee...Nice write! I think its excellent you took that step and stood up to her. Brave thing to do. Keep it up. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ToTormentedToEvenCare

    I loved it.. it is like a packet of emotions that can't be delivered for the fear of hurting. This is soo what goes on in my mind, it's amazing. I love it.
    Fav line"If you touch me once, I will break you in half because for the first time in my life I am willing to hit you back"
    - sO what i think.
    =)

  • 16 years ago

    by im not the cause

    Wow it was good i know what you mean you just have to get your feelings out once in awhile

  • 16 years ago

    by XxHiis BooxX

    Omg i love this poem..its sad but still all in all a very good poem..

  • 16 years ago

    by damont

    There is alot of don't in this but the message is clear don't. yes i understand. im sorry for your situation give me an update on it im interested. im glad you took a stand for yourself.

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