Omg i love it so much but its so sad nd really treating lol but still nice gud one

There is alot of don't in this but the message is clear don't. yes i understand. im sorry for your situation give me an update on it im interested. im glad you took a stand for yourself.

Omg i love this poem..its sad but still all in all a very good poem..

Wow it was good i know what you mean you just have to get your feelings out once in awhile

I loved it.. it is like a packet of emotions that can't be delivered for the fear of hurting. This is soo what goes on in my mind, it's amazing. I love it.
Fav line"If you touch me once, I will break you in half because for the first time in my life I am willing to hit you back"
- sO what i think.
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Oh em gee...Nice write! I think its excellent you took that step and stood up to her. Brave thing to do. Keep it up. 5/5