Depressing but so touchy. ur such poems just leave me feeling so helpless everytime, i wish i could be there to give u company.

well, nicely writtend dear

all the best and take care

That was a fantastic poem again Cindy, its so though but i like the most your third stanza and the way you expressed your poem- its fantastic

Now this was filled with so much sadness, but what i liked also was the word choice of the title, it invited me to read this poem.

i'm back and i love reading this, first one from you in a long time, and i have missed them....

5/5 David

Sad but beautifully penned poem, so glad to see you writing again cindy :)

Cindy,
You have to fight to make the darkness go away! You are still so young! You are only halfway there!!!!
Don't lose faith in life, sweetie!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Cindy, this was so sad, the emotion was so deep and i could see your pain, sweetie you have everything to live for, always remember what you have got that is worth it.
Love always
Tara-Kay
x

Cindy...so beautifully sad....well written and moving....Love, Debbie

This poem makes me think a lot about myself. This is sad and so unique at the same time! 5/5

I really like your poem it is a symbol of how i have been feeling for a long time!

Fantastic poem...keep it up

I love it<3

Very good writing :)
u r so natural
ur souky

An emotionally strong write, heartfelt sorrow in every line. An amazing poem yet very sad. Stay strong my friend.

What a poem! You are a magnificent poet! The way the feelings are conveyed makes us empathize with the person. Great job!

Really like this poem :D

I'm adding this poem to my favorites!

Wow great choice of words sweetie i really enjoyed it you did a great job with the flow and description 5/5 <33

Very beautiful and sad felt write. you did an amazing job describing all your emotions and i look forward to reading more!! 5/5)
Most favourite part:
"Sadness has become me
Happiness is all pretend
Depression all around
Darkness has become my friend"

Its a good poem
I really like it.
your a wonderful poet.

You are amazing.
best poem ive heard in a long time.
very good.