Comments : Not Near, But Not Far

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenna

    This is so beautiful...i must say one of my favorites...its short but has a beautiful message...5/5 hun! keep up the wonderful job!!!

    thanks for your comment!
    MickeysBabyGurl

  • 17 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    Very good, very good. i liked it mainly because it was short, simple, and sweet with a strong message

    your servant:
    atticus

  • 17 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    I liked this poem. short and to the point.. i think u should name this "always wondering"

    i rated this a 5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Shanice Jones

    I think you should call it "find" but i like the poem its beautiful 5/5

    xxnenexx

  • 17 years ago

    by Toxic

    I think you could call it
    Finding my way to your heart
    or maybe
    If only i was by your side
    or
    Romance of my soul

    im not sure just a couple ideas

  • 17 years ago

    by Nikki

    Reflection World, A Future to Come, Answer Me, Maybe One Day, Just Imagine, Thoughtful Game....... I have no idea if these "titles" will work but I'm just suggesting......

    Nice poem By the WaY

    <33 Nikki <33

  • 17 years ago

    by SilverStrider

    "Not near but not far"

    it means not close to you in distance-wise but close in your heart. I'm not on much anymore but please feel free to msg back.

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by SilverStrider

    "Not near but not far"

    it means not close to you in distance-wise but close in your heart. I'm not on much anymore but please feel free to msg back.

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Neta

    You're an awsome writer
    good wording
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by country girl

    Thats neat. its a new look at poetry that ive never seen

  • 17 years ago

    by Nic

    Liked it