This is a painful and a hopeful poem. i love how you used music and instrument as a material in this poem, on how it reveals the ambiance of a hopeless man and the vivd emotions in here. keep it up!

I enjoyed this poem a lot, especially the analogies between life and the boy's guitar. Although at times I couldn't tell if love was the ally or the enemy, it was a very intelligent, eloquent poem. Good work! 5/5

~queenofspades~