Bryan
What a excellent piece. The emotion and imagery in this piece are great.

ask my heart why do I cry,
To feel this pain inside,
Broken hearts should not have to lie,
Have all this pain to hide,
Sweet tragedy is all I feel,
This pain is just too real,
Sweet tragedy,
Sweet tragedy,
And now my heart will never heal.

Love these lines.
Excellent!
Take care Cindy

Yay ! It`s done, and I have to say I did love this end result lol. Very well written, you expressed your emotions well in this piece. I love it.

5.5
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This was a very good write dear bryan. i really enjoyed reading this and it was amazing and i felt every word. the style you used here was also amazing. i couldn't see your poem working in any other way besides this way. good work :-)