Good job....hope you can work things out

Yeah, that first stanza basicly deffines me as well lol. I love your poems and especaily the repetitive a,b,c,b rhyming you use, it makes each stanza flow wonderfly. 5/5

Did you purposley not title this or is that because you cant think of a title?
maybe you could these:
praying to push forward
barely getting by
left with the scars of carelessness

i personally like the last one,anyway mina this is a great poem!!!

Aww, i loved this one! beautifully written! 5/5