I liked this one. You should definetly finish it.
:D

"Will any one guide him? Allow his to express his thoughts?
No, things are invisible when a dead man walks."

Amazing lines! Such powerful emotion
PM me when you finish this, it's great!
5/5
*Gem*

Greatly written poem, you should finish it. I like the way you wrote it, you have great flow hear and really good descriptions. I also like the topic very much.
All questions that you asked through the piece leave great impression and adds massive effect to the flow of the whole piece.
Greatly done!

Excellent job, I really liked this. It was meaningful and a joy to read. I didn't like the fact that you put unfinished at the end, I didn't see any need to. But it was a good try. 5/5

I loved how this began now if you can create a good back gound this would be fantastic good work Plot121

Although it's unfinished, the song has a certain close. The meaning of this poem is really sad, a hopeless guy seeking for advice and guidance. Definitely a 5/5

It's so true how one decision can shape the course of your life, and although we might not know it at the time every little decision we make no matter when we make it, affects us. Excellent work once again 5/5 GG23 second last line you have "his" when you were trying to put him. Take care

Hey this is really good.
i liked the flow in this one.
and id like to read it when you finsih it =]

5/5

xo.cindy

Great!!! Must be 5/5!!!