Amazing job! im speechless! :)

This was quite interesting. i quite like it. different but with power and emotiona. goodjob.
--lovedroughtmelody

LOL, I laughed the whole time I read the poem, very good

HAHA..this is a BRILLIANT poem. So funny..but to the point, It reminds me of myself as a kid..only it was blackberries I was trying to get for my mum to make blackberry jam! and I ended up getting stung by a wasp..coz I was reaching for the juiciest berries at the top of the bush! LOL. ( I now live in the Orchard County! but aint gona try picking apples..hehe. Really good write!