Do What U Want...Whenever U Want

"..I wonder how life is so strange
When you think you have it all figured out
You notice you're missing everything else
That when u think its all said and done
It's just the last chapter of your first book.."

A start of brilliance which flowed through,
it says all there is to say about the way one thinks of his/her life .. and the way it is shaping, or going to shape.
sometimes we take things for granted, sometimes we over do it ..

A super write this, i really liked the way you put together these thoughts.
Don't stop writing
Keep it coming

~Wake~

Wow, 116 visits, and no ones rated?
I Like the ending; Not so much the first stanza or whatever it's called.

I can relate to it and sometimes I hesitate, and sometimes I say what I like, and people get up at me about it; IT'S CONFUSING! People are telling you to be "YOURSELF" but whenever you do they shove it down your throat.
Dah.

5/5 =]

True emotions

It's a good poem. I like the thoughts behind it. I think that you don't need to repeat yourself in your very last line. I was thinking you could take out the VERY last line and just end it with "And let it all out" because that really sums it up!
*ME*