by ChrisT
Great poem... thats true about the heart... one thing work on your rythm a little so it just slides off the tongue other than that awesome choice of words and has amazing meaning |
by Nix
Ending is very effective. Honestly I don't like first stanza, because repetition of-a heart- leaves really bad impression and it is totally needless. I suggest you to change it and put some metaphors to create more powerful atmosphere. |
by Viola
I like this..it's kind of a unique poem in regards to the fact that you picked the Heart to talk about, but I think that's great. I love poems that are not of the ordinary. |
This is amazing. |
by Blissful
Beautiful piece of work you have here. Everything you spoke of was so true and I especially liked the ending, it tied the poem together so well. *5/5* |
by Connie
I really enjoyed this poem very much. Makes ya stop and think, and realize just how true this is! |