A night to remember

by Tracy D Rollings   Oct 10, 2007


The words I love you
dance from your tongue
cool breeze blows in my face
taking the breath away
shear beauty has filled this place
life stands still today
for your hand in mine
our hearts beat together
feelings I know will last forever
a warm soft kiss
touch of your skin
more I'm with you
the deeper I fall in
fireplace gives light
passion in the air
remembering this night
knowing you care
love has it's moments
time set just right
may it last forever
as I hold you so tight..©2007 Tracydr42

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kaz

    Grr8888 wrkk..i love this poem.. the way u describe evrything goin on along wid ur feelings.. n the ending wz just awesome..

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, Tracy, this is so beautiful... You can always touch my heart with your poetry.
    Greatly written love poem, from the beginning to the end. I like the atmosphere that you created and your descriptions are so good!
    Keep up :)
    5/5 from me

  • 17 years ago

    by Melody Christina

    Aww this one is so sweet:)
    I love your poems!!!5/5 always..Melody.=)

  • 17 years ago

    by LiNa

    Really a great poem it took my breathe away and it painted a picture in my mind and i felt like i could see every detail it was great.5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Timothy r

    This was a fantasic piece, I would say amazing, but after reading alot of your work, amazed simply will not do it justice. I loved the feelings that came to the surface while reading this. Keep up the great work, no doubt you will. Timothy r

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