Very well written..... wonderful job 5/5

Good job...i agree not many people give a second chacne i always try to but the last time i did i shouldn't have cuz they just did it again...but good luck to you....love the poem

Its a beautiful poem I love it, you can really feel the emotion it is really beautiful poem
He real love it
t will get better don't worry

Aw this poem was filled with such emotion--
Flowed beautifully & was very enjoyable to read---
Excellent Write!

Brooke<3

Thats a really great poem. I reckon it flowed really well great write!

Awesome poem well done 5/5

Great job!!!
amanda

Very nice poem
I really love it and you put a lot of emotion into it, I really love it ! :)
Very good job on this one, return the favor?
And is this about that boy you met on this site? :)
X x Sarah

I loved this one too.. it makes me think of my ex marc. and the why you put everything jus goes with they way i felt with him after he cheated i loved it

This was well written and thought out.
i liked it very much.
5/5 from me.

Really Sad
But Yet Sweet

Wow!! I love The poem!!!!!!!!

5/5!!!

Hey i love the feeling in behind this one bc its real and it shows thru for sure!!!
this really has nothing to do with you poem; but good luck with your boyfriend... whne you love something you fight for it even if everyone disagrees!!!
again... i love this one good work

This was really really good and so honestly written, i like it a lot! the whole piece flowed really well and the pure emotion you have obviously put into this really shines through :)
'I'm trusting you with this one last shot
please prove yourself and make this pain go away
i love you with everything ive got' these lines are so sweet and i know how it feels.
a really good poem!!!! 5/5 defo!
x x x ali x x x

Wow this is a great poem i can really relate to this and i love it! u did really good keep writing 5/5

Jenna <3

Beautifully written but heart breaking to read.....5/5

Please keep writing and I will keep reading

This is a great poem... i really loved it. keep it up! <3

I have found writing to get our feelings out helps so much. I hope things work out for you. I believe everyone deserves a second chance. Keep writing.
Good job!
Take care Cindy

Wow i really can relate to that ive gone through that with my ex like 4 times i kept giving him another chance and another chance and he would change for a while then it would always end the same way but i really like it i hope it all works out for you <33

Awww I can totally relate to this! great job hunnn! I love the rhymes and emotions show! =]