Don't Give Up

Oh wow! I would have loved for this to be longer! It has such a good flow and I was just getting into the beat when it stopped. Really positive influence and it is so true to life, especially the friendship, when they turn their backs on you, it is one thing in life you will always learn, that some people you just have to let go of because they are not meant to be in your life. Also, I really liked your line of " When nobody listens to you,
Tell your heart." I think this reminds me of the saying that you can be your own worst enemy but you can also be your own best friend too. Lovely uplifting mood in the poem.

Another amazing and inspirational poem.. I like your style.. and its nice to read some positive inspirational poems on this site.. you did a great job on this one.. short but just to the point - don't give up... 3 words that everyone should live by.

Amazing job once again. Keep it up =)