Comments : Chalk and Cheese

  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    Back to those stages were we where in love
    Back to those stages where we couldn't enough

    should be

    Back to those stages where we were in love
    Back to those stages where we couldn't get enough

    ok now that, that is outta the way, i think it was a great poem, not sure if you wrote it bout the person i'm thinkin of, (you know who) but it was a great poem, very emotional, and you expressed it beautifully. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    Wow, great one. Like it very much!!! 5/5 from me!