Wow, I absolutely loved this poem in uncountable ways, your conveyance of thoughts and feelings, the flow was very good, and above all, the content was beautiful. I have always loved your work, you are getting so much better. Timothy r

Umm..not that you were bad before, you know what I mean I hope.

Oh Nat, this piece is filled with so much emotion and heartache.... I know its hard and I can I relate with what you're going through. Just keep on writing and maybe just maybe one day the pain with lessen.... hugs and love to ya.

I had the greatest difficulty finishing this poem, not because it was in anyway bad, quite the opposite, but because it made me remember someone i try very hard not to think about. there where just so many places in this poem where you touched something burried inside of me, and i guess it is a good thing even if painfull. like where you said
"I so repeatedly see your face
Features of the unknown
Provide a moment of relief
As I escape the unpleasant truth
Delirium breaks my heart
Again and again"
i cant tell you how any time this has happened to me. i really wish i could give you more than a 5 for this but anyway amazing poem