by Alissa Oct 11, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
A horrible heart wrenching feeling rests upon my chest, |
It was really great. I loved how much feeling you put into this poem. Keep writing. And don't worry about that lost love... there will be more! I swear to you! |
by kristian
Excellent! Keep writing more poems like this! |
by StormyStar
I love how you have so much emotion.. its not the kind of poem i usually read.. but it was a great piece you have such amazing talent keep up the good work! |
I have a poem almost parallel to this one, very good work. it had good pacing and format. and it was very well writtern, great job |
by Boy
Aww. it was awesome. i loved they way you have expressed your feelings thats was such a great poem |