5/5 i like all of your works! definitly putting you up for my favorite author list!

This is truly a wonderful poem. I love the wording, the style, the images, but I can really relate to the message and the deep, powerful emotions you've evoked. You have really captured the pain and sadness so perfectly. Having been through the trauma of divorce and the worst was feeling like I lost my daughter (luckily I got custody when she was 12 yrs.), I can definitely relate to this piece. At first it was rough but it was really a blessing as it allowed me to find myself again. If this is based on a real happening, rest assured, though it may take a little time, it will make you stronger and you will definitely breathe again, but with a new exhilarating breath upon a fresh wind of a new day. This poem really brings back a lot of memories and emotions. Very well written and so eloquently expressed.

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka