Tear Me Apart

by Jenni Marie   Oct 11, 2007


Break me, bend me, tear me right apart
Stab your way through my fragile heart
Break me, bend me, tear me right apart
Take away sunshine, placed in a world so dark

Spit on me, glare at me, lie right to my face
Smirk at me, laugh at me, as I fall from grace
Spit on me, glare at me, lie right to my face
Take pleasure in my pain, call me a disgrace

B i t c h about me, use me, think me a fool
All of this, and still think you're so cool
B i t c h about me, use me, think me a fool
Watch as I drown in this suffocating pool

Say you need me, that I matter, that you care
Yet whenever I need you, you're never there
Say you need me, that I matter, that you care
Yet whenever tears fall, all you do is stand and stare

Weeks, months, years, all slowly passed by
Never made me smile, always made me cry
Weeks, months, years, all slowly passed by
Now worked up the courage, time to say goodbye

All you've done, created a rift, this can't mend
Had all I can take, time for this to end
All you've done, created a rift, this can't mend
Still you stand there, claiming to be my friend

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  • 17 years ago

    by Robert

    I liked this poem a great deal the description was right on and the message again was really clear well done. Plot121

  • 17 years ago

    by NearlyCrazy6

    Aww. so sad! I know how you feel. I love this poem so much b/c of the word choice and the flow and the meaning behind the words. Great Job!
    *~NearlyCrazy6~*

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsey

    "Say you need me, that I matter, that you care
    Yet whenever I need you, you're never there
    Say you need me, that I matter, that you care
    Yet whenever tears fall, all you do is stand and stare"
    My favorite stanza..
    Yet again a wonderul poem..
    I can relate as well, many people have friends that say they are your friend but then do something to hurt you, its life and its Society these days, and its cruel.
    and you've pointed it out in this poem
    Good job.
    xoxo
    --Chelsey

  • 17 years ago

    by Gizmo

    That was the type of poem i needed to read, thankz, that was really really good going through the exact same feeling. and you expressed everything so well. xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    Gr8 work dear
    Keep it up
    5/5

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