Loving Your Spirit (Doditsu)

That was sweeet xx

Short and sweet I loved this. Such a tender read which swept me with the emotions of love. A gorgeous piece which portrayed your love so much within each line. The last line was definitly a favorite but the whole poem was spectacular. Great effort. ~Mel

WOOHOO!!!! So short and sweet. I can't do these shot formed pieces....they always sound too funny HAHAHA

Can I steal some of your wonder!!!! HAHAHA LOVELY WRITE!!!

This one put smile on my face and last line is so fantastic, whole poem has very unique and truly beautiful tone. You expressed so many emotions in it, well done!

I love this poem, it's so sweet and emotional, truly excellently written with such honesty and so many feelings inside. Amazing job!