Hero? No, Villain

by Independence Forever   Oct 11, 2007


With this power at my fingertips i could do right
you wish me to be good, let kindness burn bright

well i could do that but i won't be your puppet
being good has too many stipulations, so stuff it

with my power obeying rules should be secondary
what's that? a villain? i like that, sounds incendiary

bring on your thousands, try and stop me
when i open up to my power, best to flee

a hero you say? sounds weak, as a crutch
you mean nothing to me, a plague or such

let mercy come, but not at my hands
you are weak, with your pitiful bands

what have i done? nothing more than you would
being bad is more fun, try it, or at least you should

in the end it's all going to end with or without me
good has been put down, it's time for my spree

*this is a tribute to villains everywhere*

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  • 16 years ago

    by monica

    Wow this poem is so awesome very powerful

  • 16 years ago

    by XxAlysxX

    I enjoyed reading this poem and though the topic has been used many times, i like the fact that you put the efforts in making it your own and i think you accomplished it. ;)

  • 16 years ago

    by Gizmo

    Love it 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I love this poem... You have great attitude lol...
    Seriously, this is very original and creative, I like it form the beginning to the end. Whole poem has good flow and the topic is truly interesting. You held my full attention through the whole piece, mostly with effective atmosphere and imagery that you created. Truly great idea for the poem.
    Keep up!
    5/5 from me

  • 17 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    Hah, a truly loely poem. I like it. It's got an awkward rhyme to it. <3
    the only issue I have is... NO CAPITOLIZATION. =[
    It was good, but the lack of capitolization... sort of irked my nerves. Nicely written...

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