Bryan
Beautiful words of love. I always enjoy reading your work.
Excellent job!
Take care Cindy

I did indeed like this, a lot. The end was very unexpecting but it was good to add a little bit of a twist in, great job cutie.

5.5
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I like the flow... hmm actually i am inlove rightnow hehe so i love to read some love poems.. i really love reading poems more in love sad poems.. thanks for sharing.. all the lines are very clear word by word,, i understand how u really expressed ur feelings here..it seems u really inspired for writing.. keep it up 5/5