Comments : You Love Me Too (to that stupid boy)

  • 16 years ago

    by WaitAutumn

    I 'm not a fan of love poems
    got attracted by the title.
    and.. i loved it!
    i guess cause it really touched me, and i could related to it. simple word choice, but the emotion is there. you just pictured everything.
    feels as though -she's- (don't know if it's taken from your own experience) just abandoning herself to her heart, and to her love.(which could hurtfull)
    the repeating -if- just makes everything flow along.

    -so you'll just have to trust me when i tell you i love you.
    though i know you lying when
    you say you love me too. - that was my favourite stanza

    very beautiful (if im not wrong, you put a lot of yourself in this one)
    i put a 5/5 n_n

    -take care-