Be my girlfriend, be my wife.

This reminds me of a high school dance where the boys and girls are on the opposite side of the gym. Where the boy asks the girl to dance but the girl blushes and shys away :). But ah is love splendid where feelings of romance bloom and grow onto your heart and happiness does as well. This reminds me also of a soul mate kind of thing where you just know when you have found the right person. Eye contact will do that because they lead you into the soul of a person and you know, you just do. The rhyming in this poem seems natural to me and flows along well within the poem itself, well crafted write!

I love this poem from you. I can imagine it playing out in my head with your every word. The feeling of being in love is magical in someways. You decribed it so well and left the reader guessing on what could be or what is now. Excellent 5/5

I really like this piece...i donno what to say to describe why but there is just something about it that i love...keep it up hun! very good!