Very sad poem, but it's great. I loved it so much. Great job!!! 5/5

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A very well written peice, I can feel the anger and pain surge through each word. Excellent.

'I'm trying hard to improve
But stuck in a misty land
People around pretend to care
And falsely giving their adding hand'

^ I think atleast once- if not more- we feel like this in our life. Well expressed.

'Stuck in the same reality
Society's behavior is something I can't bare
They try to change you for their sake
And the only thing you get in return is false care'

^ I think this is a strong conclusion, and I applaud your choice.

Well done,
My Favourite peice so far:)
--Elly.

I could feel the anger and desperation in you words.. very powerful... your rhyming is amazing.. only one issue:

Never though it would be this way

didnt you mean thought?

amazing job babe: