I'll Make A Man Out Of You.

by Teria   Oct 11, 2007


I'll make a man out of you.

Don't think for a moment you'll be a thing like him,
there's more potential in one of your fingers than his entire soul.

Nonverbal haptics, they haunt my mind; burdened within.
For, there's more to love than love- a bit of touch as well.

I'll make a man out of you, just as you asked me to.
With a noncommittal love, we'll do the best we can -
Oh, moans upon moans, escaping too rapidly.

I know that they hear us, we're too awfully loud,
but nothing exists outside of these walls.

"Meet me at the hotel, half past two. . .
Darling, I got something in store just for you."

Don't think for a moment you'll be a thing like him,
there's more potential in one of your fingers than his entire soul.

How long did you think that we would last?
More than a day? _ Ha, you're so feeble minded.

I'm not looking for a long-term, just an overnighter.
And, I'm not looking for century, not even a decade.
Just a few moments, maybe a few hours -
of complete, non-realistic fun.

I'll make a man out of you, just as you asked me to.
With a noncommittal love, we'll do the best we can-
Oh, moans upon moans, escaping too rapidly.

I know that they hear us, we're too awfully loud,
but nothing exists outside of these walls.

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  • 17 years ago

    by ABake

    Omg!
    Dude like I effin loved this poem.
    I expected something completely different because of the category but it was AMAZING!
    I loved the idea and everything was just FANTASTIC.
    HDKSSYDTYST.
    Lol.
    Great job!
    5/5
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    Amber...

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashlee Nicole

    Wow i like that... I thought for a second it was gonna be about how you loved him so much than you went with the one night stand... nice... 5/5