by with this small heart i give u all Oct 12, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
A flame is lit |
For me it is an alright poem. the only thing that i didnt like about this poem is you keep using cuz and for me that gets old but pleaz i would love to read more of your work. im not saying its not good . it is a sad poem that you can feel all the emotions come off of the page and for that is why i like this poem. |