by StormyStar Oct 12, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Baby ill wait for you |
by Krysten
I will look in to the night |
by Fear2love
I loooove the fifth paragragh,lol |
by Loruhh
Sounds like ur in love? |
by Fixxxer
This is a sweet poem, I really hope you gave it to whoever it was intended for. Excellent write 5/5 -John stop reading if u dont like criticism, but I thought I'd mention this. When you're rhyming watch your flow. The key to good flow is matching your syllables. If you want try counting the syllables in each line and see if you find a consistent pattern. Reading aloud helps too. FYI I'm not a good poet I've just been told this before :P This poem still works perfectly though. Keep up the good work! |
by jLegendc
WOW... nice poem.. if this poem was dedicated to me.. I'd melt... good job! |