Nice nice... you must love him alot thats so cute.. 5/5

I loved this poem, it's written very well and filled with alot of emotion. I know how you feel I write some of my poems like this. Great job and keep up the great work. 5/5

I really like this poem its great ur such a good writer i wish i could write like that

Nice sweet poemm.. i like the last 2 stanzs.. really sweet.. tht kinda wraps up the whole thing..in a sweet way.. good job..

WOW... nice poem.. if this poem was dedicated to me.. I'd melt... good job!

This is a sweet poem, I really hope you gave it to whoever it was intended for. Excellent write 5/5 -John stop reading if u dont like criticism, but I thought I'd mention this. When you're rhyming watch your flow. The key to good flow is matching your syllables. If you want try counting the syllables in each line and see if you find a consistent pattern. Reading aloud helps too. FYI I'm not a good poet I've just been told this before :P This poem still works perfectly though. Keep up the good work!

Sounds like ur in love?
lolz
This is a very nice poem!
If only my love was this strong!!
5/5

I loooove the fifth paragragh,lol

I will look in to the night
I was afraid of the dark that you made light
You showed me fears in my mind
So I look for a way out and its you I find

these are my fav lines. im not sure if i like your rhyme scheam tho it took a little more to get my attention. but really all in all good word choice and go use of subject. i enjoyed it ....5/5 *oh and thnaks for the comment on mine*