Comments : Goodbye World

  • 17 years ago

    by HollywoodSmile

    Sad, depressing, and slightly disturbing. i love it. this was great, it had a great topic, flow, and the wording was fantastic.

    --TheGothicAlbino

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Very well written poem, loved it! It was really sad....flowed beautifully....did a great job on this!!!!! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    It's a very nice poem...and with a lot of emotions,..
    But if I may say you're not alone... you cant know how many people out there who are willing to be apart of your life... don't give up just yet & give the world around you a second chance...

  • 16 years ago

    by Amanda

    I Love this poem! i have felt like this for the longest time until i found the one... you will find him he's out there somewhere... and remember everything happens for a reason...

  • 16 years ago

    by linkhorizon

    This write had such a deep dreary atmosphere and of self being. i've been feeling this same way for quite some time and i can say that you've definitely conveyed the message that i've been too afraid to admit. brilliantly penned. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    Wow. short but powerful. love it

  • 15 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    No one is ment to be alone..
    even if it feels that way
    because u have been hurt..
    u arent ment to be alone.
    xox
    katrina