True Love

by justin   Oct 12, 2007


Gentle lips caressed
with a lost train of thought
two connected
in one passion
nothing can disturb it for it is perfect
with a feeling deeper then the action
that cannot be explained
few have truly known it
fewer have cherished it forever

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  • 14 years ago

    by SweetGrief

    I love it! gd job

  • 16 years ago

    by Melody Christina

    The poem is very nice, short though :(
    5/5..Melody...

    p.s. Actually there is no true love :( Cause true love is not supposed to end...
    But love ends and leaves broken hearts sometimes.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tabitha

    Wow! i liked this one! its pretty good, loved the way u expressed your feelings, its really beautiful =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Hollywood

    Wow that is so amazing so powerful so...so well i cant put it into words.oh and ur other poems to their really good

  • 17 years ago

    by Mandell Holmes

    HEY MAN LOVE THIS TRUE LOVE POEM YO.
    IF YOU EVER HAVE TIME,COULD YOU PLEEZE CHECK OUT MINE??
    BUT LOVE YOUR WORK.

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