I love it. It was a very good first attempt at this style, great job Dear.

5.5
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Bryan
This is the first of this form I have read. Excellent job! Very sad and gut wrenching.
Take Care Cindy

Bryan, This was quite an interesting piece. I liked the style I believe this is your first attempt at it. To me you mastered it quite well. Such an emotional piece which held a great impact over me. Well done. keep up the good work. ~Mel