Deadly Night

by Devon   Oct 12, 2007


What a deadly and silent night,
Remain not even fear,
You're probably still right,
She might be far from here.

Dead leaves lying on the ground,
Dusty wind whirling on the trees,
There wasn't any sound,
Except fishes in the pound.

The poor little boy,
Deeply sank with depression,
There was no joy,
In his last expression.

What's left in him was anger,
He's going to end his suffer.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Amanda

    I really like that ...is it kinda a reflection of you ?

  • 16 years ago

    by Twisted Mind Broken Soul

    This poem is really really good 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Adam RIP Lesthat and Cody Hayden

    Great poem.very scary.5/5
    **lesthat

  • 17 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    I love this. The mood and structure were awesome, and I especially loved the last two lines.

    You have a really unique style of writing... it's very refreshing to read something different. Keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    This kind of freaked me out in a good way I mean. The wording, the vivid imagery, awesome! 5/5

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