Say it

I can relate to this poem in a way. Hearing those 3 simple words I love you mean so much and they are what keep me strong coming from my boyfriends heart, without them I don't know how I'd end up feeling. This was such an enjoyable read. Beautifully sad I must say. Simple effective and stunning. Well done. loved it. Of course a 5/5 from me because you touched my heart. ~Mel

"its your voice,
the calm tone.
its what i need,
to leave you alone."

This was a brilliant part of the poem, excellent job!

Really nice poem. I really like it. 5/5

Keep writin

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Well written poem with simple but effective wordings and a good flow ofcourse :)

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My fav lines

i love you,
you need to say.
say it please,
so i can be happy for another day

The word choice was simple yet effective, the first stanza is my favorite, the flow was great, and the emotion is deep. I am not really into love poems, but this one kept my intrest. 5/5