by Kasey Oct 12, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
He told her to straighten up her life and that it was over. |
Eww men are sooo DUMB!!!! ARGHHH |
by Bhavin
Thank u 4 a short n sweet comment. I would be lying if I say that I liked your comment. About your poem, its a very nice poem but the thoughts are not exactly coming to you. Grammatical mistakes can be avoided. Use punctuations. But a very very nice work. Keep improving. Well done. Bye. |
by Airika
Good one//i have alot of poems about lost reltionship....cuz the same thing just happened to me..but good job=] |
by StormyStar
Awl! this is totally cute! its sad and just whicked cute! good work! 5/5 |
by Tim Mauntler
I think each line drags on a little, but otherwise- it's good |