I LoVe this!!! 5/5 duuhh!

I'm speechless after reading this.. it is going on my favourites because its just.. amazing. lol
I honestly have no words to say how great this is. The detail is all there..
wow, lol

I'll stop rambling on now. lol
5/5!
*Gem*

You're really good. i read this and it kinda took me outta here. i was totally consumed by these words. 5/5

I really loved the imagery in this - how close these two people were, and the loved shared between them.

The only thing I didn't like was the form of the poem. All the lines were bunched up, and - it's just a personal thing with me - but I hate that. lol.

Apart from that, though, I loved it. :]