Awwww cute...love is so sweet specially when he asks you to marry him...im engaged as well! its so wonderful! keep it up!

Hmmmm sweet poem. the structure is great and the feeling clear. only thing that gets me, you say seems like so long ago when you first met, than you say even longer ago he came back.. that kind of through me off, I'm curious as to why you wrote it like that. 5/5 though this poem is excellent, keep it up
-John

Ohhh....this poem is so sweet! Very heartfelt and well written! Kep up the good work !!!

It was such a sweet poem. i loved every word of it. the poem was simple but great. loved the structure. 5/5

nikki

Short and sweet! omg i totally love it hunnn! you should totally give this to him!!! =]

Awww so cute one! A beautiful story, and readers could only imagen how much this poem meens to you. Must be very very special for you. I really like it also because It is based on pure feelings. So like really really good!
Amazing piece! 5/5 Keep it up

I like it a lot, its really good. =]

Omg, brought me tears!!!