When I open my eyes and see

by The Angel of Secrets   Oct 12, 2007


They said to me: Follow Him,
He will show you your path.
But my road is dark ahead,
And I'm building up in wrath.

They said to me: He will show mercy,
He will guide us into bliss.
But when I look around, I see,
There's so much here to miss.

They said to me: He'll forgive you now,
A new day, a new chance.
But when I see the world today,
No happiness I glance.

They said to me: Believe in God,
You'll come to heaven one day.
But when I look up to the sky,
There's no light on my way.

They said to me: Worship Him,
He will love you no matter what you do.
But us humans have failed a lot,
I don't see mercy, do you?

They said to me: It's your own choice,
He watches us, here below.
But when I open my eyes and see,
I realize: God left this place years ago.

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  • 17 years ago

    by oddi tea

    Wonderful. I finaly see your one downfall, it is your titles. Make them short, sweet and to the point. Summarize the whole poem in just a few words. This one COULD be called "They Said To Me" but of course you need to realize that this is my opinion and, well, it is your poem. Keep writing and go far. 5/5 Veg Poet

  • 17 years ago

    by brittany beal

    I feel as though i should tell you. this is an amazing
    poem. but god hasn't left.

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