by The Angel of Secrets Oct 12, 2007
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
They said to me: Follow Him, |
by oddi tea
Wonderful. I finaly see your one downfall, it is your titles. Make them short, sweet and to the point. Summarize the whole poem in just a few words. This one COULD be called "They Said To Me" but of course you need to realize that this is my opinion and, well, it is your poem. Keep writing and go far. 5/5 Veg Poet |
I feel as though i should tell you. this is an amazing |