I feel as though i should tell you. this is an amazing
poem. but god hasn't left.

Wonderful. I finaly see your one downfall, it is your titles. Make them short, sweet and to the point. Summarize the whole poem in just a few words. This one COULD be called "They Said To Me" but of course you need to realize that this is my opinion and, well, it is your poem. Keep writing and go far. 5/5 Veg Poet