Bleeding Crimson Rain

I love how you repeated the first stanza in the last stanza. It just totally grabbed the readers attention as an opening and topped the poem off as an ending.

I like the fact that you painted a vivid picture and used details to be so descriptive.

The third stanza:
"Would you be my guide, please
through the meadows turned to stone?
With the heart on the sleeve I surrender
while the fire rages in bones."

^^Grasbbed my attention the most. Largely because I have felt this way so many times and was left wanting to surrender my life for a moment that seemed forever frozen in time.

Overall.. good job!

~~Sher

The first stanza was amazing, even the first line. I'm glad I got to read it again at the end lol. Which, by the way, was a perect way to end this amazing piece. I feel like i just keep repeating myself but, I will say it again... great imagery and amazing vocab. 5/5

marcella

Wow, this was beautiful my favourite by far. I loved the first line it capturvated me. Really well done with your poems xxx alex xxx

Amazing work! No words to describe how good this poem was! Just beatiful! all i can say is wow, and i wish i could write this good! You have a gift! Keep up the great work! Rate this a ten!

Hmm im nt really gttn a clear picture here.. but ur wrds r soo. deep.. i mean.. they just attract the reader.. the way u play with wrds.. its like u mastered poetry.. srslly. ur epoems r awesome.. like othrz.. this goes fr 5/5 gr8 skiill