So creative, unique and truly beautiful, you wrote this one with so many feelings and you truly create powerful atmosphere. Very deep poem, personal and filed with so many of yours amazingly expressed emotions. I love it, imagery is also excellent and you put your self in it.

I cannot say much more than DarkSpirit did, other than this was truly an amazing write, I loved the flow and the words jumped from the page. Timothy r

This piece is really unique, I loved this amazing write. You have no idea how talented you are with poetry. Your word choice beautiful as always. You create such an interesting story within your poems. Loved this. Well done. Keep on writing. ~mel

Wow truly descriptive and i could feel the pain 5/5

Now and never......such little words with so much meaning. Again you've shown why I continue to come to this site.

This is gorgeous...
It sounds like you took your heart and poured it into your words. I can almost see the conveyed images in my mind. 5/5

Very interesting read, never would of thought to use that kind of wording in a love poem. Great write, with a good flow.

Peace, Joe

Its So Differnet And Effective And Inspiring And Emotion And Amazing And Beautifully Done!! Perfect In Every Way!!!
perfectlyBROKEN xx

Truely brilliant....absolutley amazing....u have an amazing gift.....keep it up.....WOW!!

Your vocabulary is astounding me I love your use of words but its like your beating a bush and never reaching the core of what you want to say. Oh well I liked the description anyways. Plot121

Hmm im nt really gttn a clear picture here.. but ur wrds r soo. deep.. i mean.. they just attract the reader.. the way u play with wrds.. its like u mastered poetry.. srslly. ur epoems r awesome.. like othrz.. this goes fr 5/5 gr8 skiill

Amazing work! No words to describe how good this poem was! Just beatiful! all i can say is wow, and i wish i could write this good! You have a gift! Keep up the great work! Rate this a ten!

Wow, this was beautiful my favourite by far. I loved the first line it capturvated me. Really well done with your poems xxx alex xxx

The first stanza was amazing, even the first line. I'm glad I got to read it again at the end lol. Which, by the way, was a perect way to end this amazing piece. I feel like i just keep repeating myself but, I will say it again... great imagery and amazing vocab. 5/5

marcella

I love how you repeated the first stanza in the last stanza. It just totally grabbed the readers attention as an opening and topped the poem off as an ending.

I like the fact that you painted a vivid picture and used details to be so descriptive.

The third stanza:
"Would you be my guide, please
through the meadows turned to stone?
With the heart on the sleeve I surrender
while the fire rages in bones."

^^Grasbbed my attention the most. Largely because I have felt this way so many times and was left wanting to surrender my life for a moment that seemed forever frozen in time.

Overall.. good job!

~~Sher