Cross my Heart Hope to.....

by xxSuicidalxx   Oct 12, 2007


Cross my heart
Hope to die

A feeble wish
I want to come to

Cause of you
I know i'm through

Pain that nevers dissapears
Has lasted too many years

I take this knife
Give up the fight

All this will end
In the dark of tonight

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ill Give Blood To Your Dried Veins

    I love this poem a lot. So very well written.

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Oops it was "to come true" oopsy!

  • 17 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    I like your starting point, but the flow is a bit off for me, Changing a word ot 2 here and there would definetely help. Like in the 2nd part:

    A feeble wish
    I want to come to

    Your first lines just don't flow into these ones, I would change up the last part, i could give some suggestions, but only you know what you like. I hope this helps :)

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