Awwww....this poem is so sad! But it is very sweet and well written! I really like it! Keep up the good work!

Ahhh truely amazing. A wonderful idea using the same sentence at beginning give an great effect. It was so sweet, cute and heartbreaking. Just ending ahh aww makes me so pissed off at thouse kind of guys who kinda sick way like hurting. Grrr!
But poem itself was Brilliat!
Really enjoyed reading it. Keep it up!
5/5

Wow, it almost felt like I was the girl reading the poems. Probably because I've been there lol. But this poem was amazing, yet sad. I loved it! 5/5

Okay, so I hate cussing in poems, but other than that, this piece was very well done. Your last stanza was awesome. And I love the switch in your main words. Good job!
*ME*

I loved how you structured your poem here. It was quite effective and so was the reptitition you used. Well done *5/5*

Reading poems of lost love,she finally breaks down
Tears hit the floor but she doesn't make a sound
^beautiful