by Miu Oct 12, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Beach under beaming soft sun. |
by ali
This is so well written, the words are perfect, painting an awesome image...the emotions are clear and easy to relate to, omg its just wow!!!!! |
by Tammie
This was such a delicate poem, I can't think of any other way to describe it. I really enjoyed it. The emotion was strong, as was the flow and storyline. The ending was my favourite part, especially the last line, I think it wrapped this piece up nicely. You have a good choice of words here. Well done. :] 5/5 |
All i can say is wow. this poem was well written with good ppacing and good format, and yet i still could not get the whole "soul crubbles" part |
Great poem, flowed nicely. Alot of great vocab your English teacher would have been proud. Haha, great job keep up the good work. 5/5 |
Interesting poem. I thought here and there the flow was a little choppy, but you made up for that with the last stanza. I loved that stanza. |