I enjoyed the simplicity of this poem; what it says, and how it shows your love and emotion. I think that the end could have been better though, more powerful. The rest of the stanza's rhymed and flowed nicely, except for that one, so I think that if it rhymed it would be better. Other than that, a well penned piece. :]

Tammie

You could add a bit more to the ending, but other than that I loved this poem.
I could really feel the emotion! Great job!
-C.P.-

I know how u feel!!! This is a great poem that is well written and it flows really good. Again great job! 5/5

Beautiful piece you have here. The emotion of needing someone is truly clear to me and I could totally relate. Well done *5/5*