by oddi tea Oct 13, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Could you forgive |
by JustKristina
Awww.. i like it.. and i agree with Tim, som of the rhymes... just don't go, but its really good!!! keep it up!!!!!! =0) |
by Tim Mauntler
Some of the rhymes seem forced, but otherwise it's good |