Bryan
What a very sad piece. The pain of losing the one you love is the worst and you have expressed that very well.
Excellent job!
Take Care Cindy

Gosh..! it has great dedication... actually when i see the titled of this poem iwas captivated so i never hesitate to open and read it.. and it was totally very impressed and well written, i love the way how u write it, the emotion was very deep feeling. i really enjoyed reading it, i think u deserve to have 5/5

god bless