That description that was used what excellent. keep up the good work

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"fascination with the words within"
^^ with/within I think that's too much 'with' 's, eh.
Maybe switch the first with to 'of'.

Wow, I love it. Honestly, it's almost flawless. You had that one thing I thought was a bit off with the with/within.

The emotion was quite amazing, along with the flawless flow and amazing word choice.

Keep it up darling.
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